Combined with smiles and laughter I release
My inner anger spreads into the air
The stench of fear is overcome by peace
The calmness of an empty dragon’s lair
A smile so innocent from her lips so pure
Unclothes the pieces of my inner gloom
The more she smiles the more I feel secure
Undressing me as spring bursts into bloom
She shakes as I exchange her gentle touch
We mate and I ascend into a haze
The fire burns as we lay whole and clutch
Our passion keeps the dying flame ablaze
Forever seems to linger far away
All I ask for is another day
bohemiaspeaks 
The poem you posted is very intimate and passionate. Why do you need to ask for another day, given everything else you just shared?
asking for eternity seems unrealistic, too ambitious and maybe even greedy. true love is selfless and in that respect it is humble in its ambitions :)
Very intriguing, well I hope she appreciate your efforts. Maybe you can both build toward an eternity.